Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Final Project

Final Project 
Growing Up
Eighth Grade 
Four Genres by Hanna Rose Kronholm 



Dear Reader,
This essay is based on the topic "Growing Up". There are four genres, a movie review, poem, e-mail and a fashion article. The e-mail relates directly to To Kill A Mockingbird by Harper Lee and the play Romeo and Juliet by Shakespeare. The next is a poem comparing a flower to growing up. The third part is about a movie and how the main character coped with growing up and my opinion about this. Finally, the last part is a fashion article.  Over the course of this essay I will tell you my opinions on growing up and things that I discovered about Scout and Juliet while we were analyzing the book and play. I hope my essay gives you a different prospective on growing up.

Sincerely,
Hanna Rose Kronholm



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Email—To: Scout@TKAM.com
From—Juliet@balcony.com

Subject- Advice on Growing Up


Dear Scout,
Even though we have never met I have heard a lot about you, and I feel like I have known you for a long time.  I wanted to take this opportunity to give you some advice that I wish someone had given me when I was your age.  When I was only 12 years old, my family arranged a marriage for me, but I had only met this boy a couple of times before.  I didn’t have any feelings for him and I wish that I had communicated to my parents that I didn’t want an arranged marriage. My advice to you would be to take a couple of minutes to talk to your father about what you want in life. I met a wonderful boy named Romeo, even after I had an arranged marriage planned. I later found out that our families don’t get along, to the point in which they want to kill each other.  My father forbade me from ever marrying him, but I continued to love him and we are planning to get married.  I wish that our families got along because I know that if Romeo weren’t a Montague my family would accept him. So my advice to you would be to make sure you really know important information about the person before you fall in love.  It could be very shocking to find out later that your father doesn’t like the person you have fallen in love with or their family. However, you should always follow your heart no matter what other people say. I hope we have the chance to meet face to face some day.

                            Sincerely,
                            Juliet Capulet  

*****

Growing up is like a flower, 
You start out small and helpless
Your parents feed you and nourish you with love
Just like the sun.
 Like a flower it takes time to grow and be able to stand on your own,
To be able to go through storms and changes on your own.
Just like a flower you have to spread you petals,
become your own person.
Make decisions on your own because you’re not a little flower anymore,
You've grown and blossomed into a mature beautiful flower of life. 


*****
  
 Movie Review
Last Song
Starring Miley Cyrus (Ronnie), and Greg Kinnear (Dad)
4 STARS ****

     In this movie Miley Cyrus, who plays a teenage girl named Ronnie, is having a difficult time at this point in her life. Her parents got divorced two years ago. One of her passions was playing the piano, following in her father’s footsteps, and planning to attend Julliard. When her parents divorced and her father moved out of the house, she quit playing the piano. She started to not care about anything, and was having a difficult time in school. Her parents then told Ronnie and her brother that they were going to spend the summer at their dad’s house. Ronnie was very upset that she had to go because she blamed her parent’s divorce on her father. Later in the summer, her dad has a seizure on the beach and he finally tells them that he has lung cancer. That is when Ronnie really starts to grow up. She starts to forgive her father and she realizes that it was just as much her mother’s fault for getting a divorce. Her brother is very upset about his dad’s illness and he knows that they are both going to lose their dad. Ronnie realizes that she has to be there for both her dad and her brother. At the end of the summer her mom comes to pick them both up and Ronnie tells her that she is staying with her dad. Her mother doesn’t agree with this decision and tells Ronnie that her dad is going to get much worse. Ronnie doesn’t listen and stays with her dad for his last months. In those couple of months that they spend together her dad tells her that it is his dying wish that she play the piano again. At first Ronnie is very hesitant, but she knows that her father is going to die soon and she wants to make him happy. She decides to play that night and as she’s playing she looks over at her dad smiling, and when she looks back up she has realized that he has dropped his glass and has died. Ronnie grew up a lot over that summer she spent with her dad. She learned how to care for someone she really loved. Along with that she learned to move on after her father’s death, not forgetting him, but keeping him always in her heart. This movie has done very well in the box office and I recommend you bring a set of tissues.
*****
Ways to Look More Grown up! 
Teen Vogue 

         Just a couple tips on how to look more grown up. First of all a darker hair color looks more sophisticated, even if it's a darker shade of your natural hair color. Stay away from heavy makeup, in most cases its not attractive and it doesn't make you look sophisticated. When dressing you should not wear things to tight but at the same in not too loose either. You need to find pieces of clothing that fit your body the right way. Growing up can be a confusing time and it often reflects in the way you look, but I hope these three simple tips help you while growing up.

Thursday, April 28, 2011

Free Style Writing

Rain,
Rain is crashing on the grass,
Rain is splashing on the rocks,
Rain is sitting on the trees,
Rain is hitting me,
Rain.

Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Essay #13


Essay 13
True Love;
Do you Fall, Find, or Discover it?
An Essay By Hanna Rose Kronholm
Mr.H.Salsich
Wednesday, April 27, 2011


               Have you ever thought about how you might find love? You may not be searching for it, but love may find you. Real love survives through anything and everything. Love found my grandparents and one day I hope it comes to me too.

                I believe that true love, real love, will find me, whether I find love, or love encounters me. I may not be looking for love, searching for the right person, comparing people, asking myself who I like, wishing I had someone, coming to that day that I do find someone, hoping they love me the same way I love them. I may run into love many times but really true love is something I think you only come across once in your life. I think it takes a good amount of time to build love, strengthening a bond, loving the other person the way they love you, building a healthy relationship, falling in fervor with that special person. I've been told that love is worth the wait and when you have fallen in love you'll know it.  I  believe that some people can fall in love at first sight. I feel that love will not just find me but everyone.

       When I think of a truly loving relationship, the two people that stand out in my mind are my grandparents. My mom's parents have been happily married for 46 years. They have gone through most of their life together, loving each other, building not only a house but a home, raising their five children, working through struggles and problems, experiencing the good times and the bad.  All of these things are what I think makes their love so strong. They are always happy when they are around each other; they have the time of their lives together each and every day and cherish everything. My grandparents trust each other and lean on one another for support. The loving relationship my grandparents have is amazing, and I hope someday I will find love like they did.

         Love can happen when you least expect it. When you find love you should hold onto it and cherish it forever. I know that people say that love is magical; I hope that when I encounter love it’s magical for me too. I believe that love never dies.



Self Assessment-
1.) I think that I could work on making my paragraphs a little more descriptive and add more detail.

2.) One thing that I am particularly proud of is my introduction paragraph and my taffy sentences. I feel like I did a very good job on them both.

3.) One thing that I could work on for next time would be having more F.A.S.T. words they would help make my paragraphs not as repetitive.

4.) I would give myself a B+ on this essay  I fell like I did a very good job and I put a lot of time and effort into it.


Outline for Essay #13

Outline for Essay #13
Hanna Kronholm
"Love"
Wednesday, April 20 2011
TS- I think that real love will find me.
SD- Weather i find it or it finds me.
CM- I might not be looking or i may be (loose sentence)
CM- I might run into it a lot, and find true "real" love many times or maybe just once.
SD- I feel like love takes a while to build, it doesn't just happen over night
CM- Once you build up love, you have fallen in love
CM- Falling in love is something i believe in, sometimes its," Love at first sight."
CS- I think love will find me, and all of us.

TS- Two people that stand out to me when you say, "to people who have a truly loving relationship." would be my grandparents.
SD- My grandparents have been happily married for 46 years
CM- They have gone through most of life together
CM- My grandparents have grow and had struggles and raised a family together which is what i think makes there love so strong.
SD- They are always happy when there together.
CM- They have the time of there life together everyday just being with each other.
CM- They trust each other and lean on each other.
CS- The loving relationship my grandparent have is amazing, and i hope someday i will find love like they did.

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Sonnet Poem on Friendship

A flower growing in the time of spring
Its like the bond that you will have together
The flower grows, and the friendship sings
Your friendship might be pulled like a tether
The friendship might not be as easy as a swing
But one day it will be as strong as leather
Sometimes friendships are dangling by a string
And might fall as easy as a feather

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Friendship is Like the Air I breathe;
Always there for me
An Essay by: Hanna Rose Kronholm
Wednesday, April 13 2011
Mr.H.Salsich



  The friendships in my life are very important to me. The one that stands out the most to me is the bond and friendship I have with my cousin Simone. She means so much to me and when we're not together something feels wrong. My closeness with Simone has been strong since we were in kindergarten. I think that my friendship with her would be compared to air because it's something you purely need, and I feel that I need her to live.

             To me friendship is like the air I breathe. My cousin Simone and I have a friendship like no other. Without air to breathe I would die, like without Simone I would feel dead inside and lost in life. I take the air for granted, like I do sometimes with our closeness, but Simone means the world to me. I depend on the air to keep me alive, filling my lunges, bringing me forward to the next moment in life, ruling my life, keeping me conscious. I depend on Simone, just as she depends on me, to give me marvelous advise and withhold my secrets. I know that I can trust her with anything I have on my mind, any problems or concerns and she always knows the right thing to say to make me feel better. Simone and I truly have a bond like no other, strong enough to go through anything. Just like air, she's always there for me. 

      Simone is a necessity to me and so is the air that I breath. I can trust her with anything. I know that she will help me through any crisis I have and I would help her through anything too. We will continue to be best friends forever. Even though we will have to be separated next year because we are going to different schools, just like the air we breathe, we will be there for each other. Our time might be limited but it cannot break our bond.  Simone has truly made a big impact in my life and I wouldn't trade our friendship for anything in the world.

Essay Outline #12

TS- My friendship is like the air we breathe

SD Air's always there because you need it
CM Kinda like my friend ship
CM With out it i would be lost

SD Take it for granted
CM like friendship
CM "                    "

SD Depend on the air
CM depend on someone to keep your secrets
CM depend on the person to always be there

CS