Assesment: Salvation Army #1

Today I went for my first visit at the Salvation Army in New London, CT. I started to sort cloths by ages from 12 months to adults. There were many other volunteers busily walking around preparing for Christmas. Our goal was to organize the cloths so that other volunteers could walk in and pick out out fits, they then put them in bags and brought them down stairs to give to poor-family's. When I went down-stairs to hand out bags to parents waiting to reserve toys for their kids, i felt bad. I felt bad because they had close to nothing, and i had Ugg boots and a Roxy sweater on. I am so privileged to have nice clothes and food for Christmas. I learned a lot form this first visit at the Salvation Army.

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8-sentence Paragraph

TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis)

Dill is lonely

Bell word Lonely

SD Dill makes things up; to get attention

Echo word to be used FRIENDLESS

        CM He tells story's that don't happen       

 CM He exaggerates things so that people will pay attention to him

    SD You can tell when people are lonely

Echo word to be used GLOOMY

        CM   You can see that they are faking it; they are trying to be something their not. 

     CM They try to laugh and smile when really they are upset.