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TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis)

Dill is lonely

Bell word Lonely

SD Dill makes things up; to get attention

Echo word to be used FRIENDLESS

        CM He tells story's that don't happen       

 CM He exaggerates things so that people will pay attention to him

    SD You can tell when people are lonely

Echo word to be used GLOOMY

        CM   You can see that they are faking it; they are trying to be something their not. 

     CM They try to laugh and smile when really they are upset.