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Essay #13

Essay 13

True Love;

Do you Fall, Find, or Discover it?

An Essay By Hanna Rose Kronholm

Mr.H.Salsich

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

               Have you ever thought about how you might find love? You may not be searching for it, but love may find you. Real love survives through anything and everything. Love found my grandparents and one day I hope it comes to me too.

                I believe that true love, real love, will find me, whether I find love, or love encounters me. I may not be looking for love, searching for the right person, comparing people, asking myself who I like, wishing I had someone, coming to that day that I do find someone, hoping they love me the same way I love them. I may run into love many times but really true love is something I think you only come across once in your life. I think it takes a good amount of time to build love, strengthening a bond, loving the other person the way they love you, building a healthy relationship, falling in fervor with that special person. I've been told that love is worth the wait and when you have fallen in love you'll know it.  I  believe that some people can fall in love at first sight. I feel that love will not just find me but everyone.

       When I think of a truly loving relationship, the two people that stand out in my mind are my grandparents. My mom's parents have been happily married for 46 years. They have gone through most of their life together, loving each other, building not only a house but a home, raising their five children, working through struggles and problems, experiencing the good times and the bad.  All of these things are what I think makes their love so strong. They are always happy when they are around each other; they have the time of their lives together each and every day and cherish everything. My grandparents trust each other and lean on one another for support. The loving relationship my grandparents have is amazing, and I hope someday I will find love like they did.

         Love can happen when you least expect it. When you find love you should hold onto it and cherish it forever. I know that people say that love is magical; I hope that when I encounter love it’s magical for me too. I believe that love never dies.

Self Assessment-

1.) I think that I could work on making my paragraphs a little more descriptive and add more detail.

2.) One thing that I am particularly proud of is my introduction paragraph and my taffy sentences. I feel like I did a very good job on them both.

3.) One thing that I could work on for next time would be having more F.A.S.T. words they would help make my paragraphs not as repetitive.

4.) I would give myself a B+ on this essay  I fell like I did a very good job and I put a lot of time and effort into it.

Outline for Essay #13

Outline for Essay #13

Hanna Kronholm

"Love"

Wednesday, April 20 2011

TS- I think that real love will find me.

SD- Weather i find it or it finds me.

CM- I might not be looking or i may be (loose sentence)

CM- I might run into it a lot, and find true "real" love many times or maybe just once.

SD- I feel like love takes a while to build, it doesn't just happen over night

CM- Once you build up love, you have fallen in love

CM- Falling in love is something i believe in, sometimes its," Love at first sight."

CS- I think love will find me, and all of us.

TS- Two people that stand out to me when you say, "to people who have a truly loving relationship." would be my grandparents.

SD- My grandparents have been happily married for 46 years

CM- They have gone through most of life together

CM- My grandparents have grow and had struggles and raised a family together which is what i think makes there love so strong.

SD- They are always happy when there together.

CM- They have the time of there life together everyday just being with each other.

CM- They trust each other and lean on each other.

CS- The loving relationship my grandparent have is amazing, and i hope someday i will find love like they did.

Sonnet Poem on Friendship

A flower growing in the time of spring
Its like the bond that you will have together
The flower grows, and the friendship sings
Your friendship might be pulled like a tether
The friendship might not be as easy as a swing
But one day it will be as strong as leather
Sometimes friendships are dangling by a string
And might fall as easy as a feather

Friendship is Like the Air I breathe;

Always there for me

An Essay by: Hanna Rose Kronholm

Wednesday, April 13 2011

Mr.H.Salsich

  The friendships in my life are very important to me. The one that stands out the most to me is the bond and friendship I have with my cousin Simone. She means so much to me and when we're not together something feels wrong. My closeness with Simone has been strong since we were in kindergarten. I think that my friendship with her would be compared to air because it's something you purely need, and I feel that I need her to live.

             To me friendship is like the air I breathe. My cousin Simone and I have a friendship like no other. Without air to breathe I would die, like without Simone I would feel dead inside and lost in life. I take the air for granted, like I do sometimes with our closeness, but Simone means the world to me. I depend on the air to keep me alive, filling my lunges, bringing me forward to the next moment in life, ruling my life, keeping me conscious. I depend on Simone, just as she depends on me, to give me marvelous advise and withhold my secrets. I know that I can trust her with anything I have on my mind, any problems or concerns and she always knows the right thing to say to make me feel better. Simone and I truly have a bond like no other, strong enough to go through anything. Just like air, she's always there for me. 

      Simone is a necessity to me and so is the air that I breath. I can trust her with anything. I know that she will help me through any crisis I have and I would help her through anything too. We will continue to be best friends forever. Even though we will have to be separated next year because we are going to different schools, just like the air we breathe, we will be there for each other. Our time might be limited but it cannot break our bond.  Simone has truly made a big impact in my life and I wouldn't trade our friendship for anything in the world.

Essay Outline #12

TS- My friendship is like the air we breathe

SD Air's always there because you need it
CM Kinda like my friend ship
CM With out it i would be lost

SD Take it for granted
CM like friendship
CM "                    "

SD Depend on the air
CM depend on someone to keep your secrets
CM depend on the person to always be there

CS