Thursday, September 30, 2010

Essay #3

Hanna Rose
Mr.Salsich
English 8b
Essay #3
9/29/10

Miss Caroline and Atticus have very different styles of teaching; they teach different things to Scout. Miss Caroline has very strong belifes and Atticus goes with the flow. Miss Caroline is a more strucktered teacher and and Atticus didn't intend on teaching Scout how to read it just happened.

TS Miss Caroline and Atticus are very different teachers to Scout. SD Their jobs as teachers are different, Atticus is Scout's dad and he is teaching her things about life, not how to write like Miss Caroline.CM Atticus has taught Scout how to stand up for herself, "If you don’t hush I’ll knock you bowlegged." CM He also teaches Scout how to be polite, and respectful to others.SD Miss Caroline teaches Scout schoolwork like how to read and write. CM Miss Caroline gets mad at Scout for knowing how to read already, because Atticus taught her. CM Miss Caroline is very nice, she offers to give a boy that is very poor some money “here is a quarter, you can pay me back tomorrow," but she is a very strict teacher unlike Atticus. SD Miss Caroline and Atticus do have some similarities though, they both want to teach Scout how to read. CM They are also both very generous and not judgemental.CM “Now, don't you be talking about the Radley's house that way!" CS They have different ways to teach Scout, but they both have a strong role in her life.

As you can see Miss Caroline and Addicus are very different. Scout has them both to teach her different things and she needs them both for different learning challenges. Miss Caroline and Atticus never had the same way of teaching and never will.

1. I am proud of not having alot of spelling and puncuation errors.

2. I am continuing to work on making better concution sentences.

3. My weak point is the concution sentences.

4. I would give myself a B-.

2 comments:

  1. Hanna i liked how you compared Atticus and Mrs. Caroline's style of teaching. I also liked you concluding sentence, it was very well thought out. I suggest next time that you mention names, like instead of saying a boy say his name. I aslo suggest that you dont put a quote by itself as a sentence, but i think this paragraph is very well written. Keep up the good work.

    Sincerely
    Alan Carroll

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  2. Dear Hanna
    I think your paragraph is well structured and has plenty of detail. I suggest that you don't put quotes by themselves. Also while reading I noticed some comma splices in your paragraph. These are simple mistakes that can be corrected and other than that you have a very well written paragraph. Keep up the good work

    Sincerely
    John Rick

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