Outline Essay #11

Outline For Essay #11

Hanna Kronholm

Wednesday, March 30, 2011

TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis) Teenagers in 2011 struggle with many problems, along with many perks.

Bell word- Problem   

SD- The first and biggest would be all the homework and pressure most of us get, to get good grades.

        CM Most all teenagers spend a lot of time on homework every night

        CM Its hard to balance out our time, to be able to do fun things to.

Echo word- Struggle

    SD Also the amount of technology used

CM It is a big perk to most all of us, but it is also a struggle to have, because of the amount of time most of us spend playing video games or computer games.

        CM- It might almost be easier with out as much technology to hand write your assignments and not have to worry about printing e-mailing, ect.

Echo- Struggles

    SD- Many things have changed since the time our parents were young, they had the freedom to walk places and not be worried about bad people.

        CM We cant walk to school like most of our parents did, because of all the fears of not being safe.

        CM Our parents didn’t have all the medical and safety technology like we do.

CS- Although growing up in 2011 with all the problems, everyone can overcome them and work to be a better person.