Friendship is Like the Air I breathe;
Always there for me
An Essay by: Hanna Rose Kronholm
Wednesday, April 13 2011
Mr.H.Salsich
The friendships in my life are very important to me. The one that stands out the most to me is the bond and friendship I have with my cousin Simone. She means so much to me and when we're not together something feels wrong. My closeness with Simone has been strong since we were in kindergarten. I think that my friendship with her would be compared to air because it's something you purely need, and I feel that I need her to live.
To me friendship is like the air I breathe. My cousin Simone and I have a friendship like no other. Without air to breathe I would die, like without Simone I would feel dead inside and lost in life. I take the air for granted, like I do sometimes with our closeness, but Simone means the world to me. I depend on the air to keep me alive, filling my lunges, bringing me forward to the next moment in life, ruling my life, keeping me conscious. I depend on Simone, just as she depends on me, to give me marvelous advise and withhold my secrets. I know that I can trust her with anything I have on my mind, any problems or concerns and she always knows the right thing to say to make me feel better. Simone and I truly have a bond like no other, strong enough to go through anything. Just like air, she's always there for me.
Simone is a necessity to me and so is the air that I breath. I can trust her with anything. I know that she will help me through any crisis I have and I would help her through anything too. We will continue to be best friends forever. Even though we will have to be separated next year because we are going to different schools, just like the air we breathe, we will be there for each other. Our time might be limited but it cannot break our bond. Simone has truly made a big impact in my life and I wouldn't trade our friendship for anything in the world.
To me friendship is like the air I breathe. My cousin Simone and I have a friendship like no other. Without air to breathe I would die, like without Simone I would feel dead inside and lost in life. I take the air for granted, like I do sometimes with our closeness, but Simone means the world to me. I depend on the air to keep me alive, filling my lunges, bringing me forward to the next moment in life, ruling my life, keeping me conscious. I depend on Simone, just as she depends on me, to give me marvelous advise and withhold my secrets. I know that I can trust her with anything I have on my mind, any problems or concerns and she always knows the right thing to say to make me feel better. Simone and I truly have a bond like no other, strong enough to go through anything. Just like air, she's always there for me.
Simone is a necessity to me and so is the air that I breath. I can trust her with anything. I know that she will help me through any crisis I have and I would help her through anything too. We will continue to be best friends forever. Even though we will have to be separated next year because we are going to different schools, just like the air we breathe, we will be there for each other. Our time might be limited but it cannot break our bond. Simone has truly made a big impact in my life and I wouldn't trade our friendship for anything in the world.
Dear Hanna,
ReplyDeleteI like your essay. One thing in particular I liked was your F.A.S.T words. I thought they worked brilliantly in your body paragraph. I suggest you proofread your opening paragraph because there were some mistakes. I'm sure if you read it over you will find them. One suggestion is to put in a self assessment. I don't know if you were waiting to put it up or not but just letting you know.
Thanks,
Alan C.